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FEAR.........
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:27:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I can’t wait to feel the fear again
The fear of bodily harm
I need to feel the fear again
The fear that my life is about to end
Soon I’ll feel that fear again
The fear of dying below upon the rocks
I love to feel that fear again
The fear of a bullet from a glock
When I do what I’ve got to do to survive
It makes me feel alive
When I’m headed to primal state decay
All other worries fade away
I don’t want this safety net
I don’t want to be tied in
I don’t want your support
All I want is to feel that fear again
I only feel safe
When I’m about to die
Safe from lingering thoughts
That if having the tears to shed
Would make me want to cry
When I feel this fear
The world no longer is concern
When I feel this fear
The rage inside me does not burn
Soon I’ll feel that fear again
The fear of dying below upon the rocks
I love to feel that fear again
The fear of a bullet from a glock
I can’t wait to feel the fear again
The fear of bodily harm
I need to feel the fear again
The fear that my life is about to end
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Re: FEAR.........
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by ROUGE on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:00:50 AM AEST
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| I THINK ITS DEEP, GOOD WRITE. |
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Re: FEAR.........
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by poisonpen00ad on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:36:20 AM AEST
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| Dark but very good. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: FEAR.........
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:46:17 AM AEST
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Mike this was really outstanding, great deep emotive write.
Im impressed you have shown such depth as a writer i liked that.
Jane xxx |
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Re: FEAR.........
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:04:30 AM AEST
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I agree with everyone else, this is really good.
I love dark writes and you seem to do them well, if this is anything to go by.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: FEAR.........
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 09:56:23 AM AEST
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that was really good, dark writes are my fave by a long shot, great work
pix xx |
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Re: FEAR.........
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:54:26 PM AEST
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deep and heartfelt wow I wish this was just a
poem but something tells me that you write
from personal experience. I don't know what
to say except I know where you are coming
from and I hope that you get out of this lonely
place soon. Keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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