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Chaple Bells
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:31:34 AM in AEST
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If this is me then who am I
shall I know before i die
my heads not sure and my heart wont tell
I am numb from screaming angels
there voices so pure i can not hear
I can not find me hidding from fear
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Re: Chaple Bells
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:07:55 AM AEST (User
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Excuse me for saying this, I'm not trying to be rude, but it seems to me almost like you have got two different parts of different poems and stuck them together.
I can relate to the first part though, I don't think we every truly know who we are.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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