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The Passion
Contributed by
xrockstheheart
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:29:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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And many years ago he walked upon my face
Indeed they said he came to save the human race
And I recall the beatings that he took
This god was so misunderstood
And many lashes he did bear
Yes much the anguish and despair
But still the crowd chose to condemn
The King of Jews made from a man
The avatar could have brought peace
He could have with one hand at least
Stop the carnage any time
And yet, he chose to stay the line
He dragged that cross across my face
A crown of thorns and bloody lace
And none would help him with this burden
But for a pagan who was barren
And from the cross he left to me
A gift for all humanity
His life a Latin poetry
Your treason now a prosody
Behold you churchmen penitence
Excruciate the man once sentenced
But for a pagan who was barren
You would not even know of heaven
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Re: The Passion
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:37:44 AM AEST (User
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A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: The Passion
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:08:20 AM AEST (User
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What a poetic write, very nicely done on a tough subject.
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Re: The Passion
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:58:55 AM AEST (User
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javier, this is brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
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