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If I Could
Contributed by
snagamuffin
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I could take one tear drop of your shoulder I would
If I could lift all your pain I would
If I could tell you it will be ok I would
If I could tell you everyday would be happy I would
But I can't
All I can do is tell you I am here
And that I'll be there
To take that tear drop off your shoulder
Lift all your pain
Tell you its ok
And tell you tomorrow will be happy
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2002-12-17 05:00:00]
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Re: If I Could
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:40:25 AM AEST
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I think that's all we can do for people who are hurting around us is let them know that we are their for them, this is a beautiful write...with a good message behind it...thanks for sharing it..and welcome to YPDC..i look forward to more of your poetry...
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Re: If I Could
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by Snugglebear on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:38:27 PM AEST
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Hey girl! i loved your poem. and i know what you said is so true...ur a great person and you always will be. I just want you to know that i'm here for you also...that was a great poem and i hope to see alot more in here! Keep it com'n!
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