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Pieces Apart
Contributed by
calista
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:12:29 AM in AEST
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Pieces Apart
February 15, 2005
Please God, don’t let me fall
Into a life with boxed-in walls
Where everyday outside it’s spring
And ghosts slip by unintimidating
I want to live where
The wind can make the leaves applaud
A symphony of natural noise, God
And feel the tingle up my spine
When wishes would be made like mine
I want to heal an injured heart
Put it together from pieces apart
To cross the coals beneath my feet
I want to know I won’t retreat
Please God, let me forget what I have said
Please God, keep my next step un-led.
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calista
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2005-03-12 00:12:29]
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Re: Pieces Apart
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:39:06 AM AEST
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Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Pieces Apart
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:04:11 AM AEST
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| A beautifully written and expressed piece of poetry. So inspiring and uplifting. A truly enjoyable and pleasant read. Thanks for sharing it |
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Re: Pieces Apart
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:13:37 AM AEST
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I love this, this has to be my favourite line though:
The wind can make the leaves applaud
I just adore that image.
You have some great words, thankyou for sharing.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Pieces Apart
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:47:56 AM AEST
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| A very rich poem...nice write! |
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