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puddles of rain drenched in memory
Contributed by
ihopeyouchokex
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:05:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As the rain pours down on these deserted streets, Im walking through puddles of memories of all the times ive cried over you, of al the time ive spent wishing you were mine, I cant sleep anymore, It hurts too much to know that your in everyone ove my nightmares, Your with him, smiling,With him, It kills me to think that your happy without me, But maybe, if you think about it,Its for the better, Because this world doesnt need a broken heart, It could never lasts, Nothing in this cruel world lasts
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Re: puddles of rain drenched in memory
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:52:04 PM AEST
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| I can relate. I loved how you put your feelings into words. |
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Re: puddles of rain drenched in memory
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:20:43 AM AEST
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I can relate too, but so many can, I think.
I think you need some line breaks in this, to make it flow easier and read easier.
Still a good write though.
*hugs* Phil xx |
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Re: puddles of rain drenched in memory
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by glu1 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:21:02 AM AEST
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| touching. i share your pain |
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Re: puddles of rain drenched in memory
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:16:45 PM AEST
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| just beautiful. your words are magic xxx |
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