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violent
Contributed by
ihopeyouchokex
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:57:59 PM in AEST
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I'll light this fire and pour some gasoline in it, I'll pray you to walk by,I'll shove you in this fire headfirst, i'll watch you flesh burn up like winter leaves,Your beautiful eyes full of terror sick into these embers in whcih we call life,As i make the fire bigger i can see your heart stuck inside your rib cage struggiling to beat like a wounded animal, I can see every little crack in your heart from every guy thats broke it, Your amazing brown hair cringing in this fire, "It was only for the best" i can still hear your voice liek it was only yesterday,But it was for the worst wasnt it? And as the last part of your body burns up into these engulfed flames, I couldent help but think "Could this have been different if we tried to work it out"
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Re: violent
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:59:08 PM AEST
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I REALLY loved the story this told. I loved how you put so much into this little poem. Really, there's so much emotion and you put a perfect amount of information and figurative language in here. It brought such vivid pictures to mind. And I loved the ending, all the too-late uncertainty. Great write.
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Re: violent
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:48:05 AM AEST
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Remind me never to ***** u off.
Sad but written well.
huggs,
emy |
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