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Never to See Tomorrow
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:58:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Never to See Tomorrow
You want to throw it all away
Like there is no tomorrow
And just end your life because of pain
And all of your pent of sorrow
You have the chance to live
When others never did
You have so much more to give
Even if you're just a kid
But you only see what you want to see
You never see the good in anything
You're too blinded by your misery
And you want to give it all up for nothing
Under your sleeves you hide the scars
That were caused to release pain
But now they're tearing you apart
Causing you pain that doesn't go away
It was your choice to make
And I think it's a shame
That you threw it all away
Just because of the pain
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essentially9
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2005-03-11 21:58:33]
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Re: Never to See Tomorrow
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:04:49 PM AEST
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Who says there is a tomorrow....Its a very likely chance there is one but still who really knows....?, so how do you know they were to miss anything....hm.... =]
Anyways you already know whats coming next Jen...another masterful work from your greatness....as always...
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Re: Never to See Tomorrow
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:45:04 PM AEST
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Very good write Jennifer. There is not a promise of tomorrow, but then again, there is no definate word that today is our last. Tomorrow may be the best day of our lives.
Keep Smiling,
The Voice
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Re: Never to See Tomorrow
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by Jane_Doe on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:05:06 AM AEST
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Wow, I have so many suicidal people in my life that this poem just REALLY reaches out to me. I'm having such an awful night that I could relate to some of these words, but this poem has made me feel a lot better. Excellant poem.
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Re: Never to See Tomorrow
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:30:29 AM AEST
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Hun, I agree with this, I really do.
I seriously hope who ever you are talking about pulls through.
Great write hun, your feelings show through well, the flow is good too. I wouldn't change anything.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Never to See Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:32:56 AM AEST
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| I see this as an interesting answer to some of the more depresing writes on this site. clever indeed you are! |
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