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Life
Contributed by
Delmina
on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:02:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The sword of time will pierce our skin,
It doesn't hurt when it begins,
As it works it's ways on in,
Watch it as it grins,
At first it only bleeds but a trickle,
But life wants more for it is fickle,
Life is a knife to the aware,
Cutting pain to share,
So it pours upon the floor,
But life laughs and asks for more,
Tiled black and white, smooth cares,
The floor of dreams rips and tears,
The bloody puddle grows ever deep,
But life goes on without a peep,
And into the warm embrace,
We fall without a trace.
Copyright ©
Delmina
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2005-03-11 20:02:33]
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Re: Life
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:39:07 PM AEST
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| good veiw on life .. i never really thought of it that way .. thanks for letting me see another veiw ! great write ! |
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Re: Life
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by rockstarr12747 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:03:33 PM AEST
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life can hurt and this told me so good veiew of life a job well done
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Re: Life
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:00:19 AM AEST
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The complete truth is spoken here. Complete truth. Nice write, I will look for more from you...
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