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Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 1
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:21:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Unlifed, my time was up
Nothing more I could do
Giving up everything
I even gave up...on you
Suffering against my will...
Unfeeling, my essence gave away
I'm sorry I left you alone
It hurt so much
But I just had to go
Crying out my eyes, shaking, still...
Unimpaired, my eyes closed forever
Ending a scentence too deep
I had to go
Awaiting my arrival was my enternal sleep
Bleeding away, my selfish kill...
Unpained, please forgive me
I had to make my end
Taking my life
Forgive me, my love...my friend
...
Please Don't Fallow Me,
My final wish,
I wish for you to fulfill.
...
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ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-11 19:21:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 1
(User Rating: 1 ) by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:09:13 PM AEST (User
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nicely written .. good job .. but one part was a teeny bit forced .. but it wasnt bad at all .. ! |
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 1
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:39:38 PM AEST (User
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i think you are only getting better. ::glares at comment:: |
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 1
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 10:44:22 AM AEST (User
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nice work
i like it
not as dark as some i've written, but still good
Flamingblade |
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