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Stupid Boy
Contributed by
rcav8ing
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:55:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Stupid boy sits and waits
For her to come by
He waits but nothing happens
He drops hints that get no responses
He asks for time – there is never enough
Stupid girl carries bricks
For the wall so high she builds
Stupid boy must learn to break the wall
And build a pedestal for stupid girl to sit
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2005-03-11 15:55:22]
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Re: Stupid Boy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:34:41 PM AEST
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Well its definitely original. I think the more you read it, the more it grows on you, very nicely done. Such simplicity and yet such meaning... excellent. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Stupid Boy
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by electrique_poet on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:19:44 PM AEST
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i like this, it made me think of the song girl afraid by the smiths... this poem holds some strong feeling; in simplicity there is power
... in words electrique |
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Re: Stupid Boy
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:51:03 PM AEST
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Hmmm... interesting..
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