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Well?
Contributed by
rcav8ing
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:50:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Can you find the time?
For me I am not so sure
I guess I don’t count
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rcav8ing
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2005-03-11 15:50:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Well?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:35:04 PM AEST (User
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excellent haiku, just because you followed format. i rather liked the concept of it as well, i think you could easily develop this into a poem made entirely of haikus. i read one haiku that followed format and rhymed, you might give that a try, though all my attempts at it dont make much sense. |
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