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Mutilated Beauty
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Come to me my mutilated beauty.
To serve your master is your only duty,
You are alive for just one reason,
But will be dead when you go out of season.
I love to see the deep cuts on your arms,
Only for me will you perform your self harm,
The blood gushes from your wounds,
Hush my beauty your pain will end soon.
Here take hold of my carving knife,
Put an end to your miserable life,
You are worthless not deserving of breath,
I will take all of you til there’s nothing left.
Show me how much you love me,
Slash at your skin & set yourself free,
Take the blade drag it across your vein,
I promise that I will take away all your pain.
If you don’t do as I ask for it you will pay,
& forever with me in hell shall you stay,
My love I am the only one who can put an end,
To your pitiful life now make suicide your friend.
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pixie
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:24:55 PM AEST
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Woah. Your dark writes get darker with each one, this one is almost painful, but I still love it. lol.
I dunno how you do it, I don't know any others that can write like this,
Keep it up, hun.
*huggies* Phil xxx |
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:48:34 PM AEST
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I hate thinkin you or anyone else might feel this way Pixie ... that is an incredibly powerful write that screams out to the reader of pain, suffering, and the voices inside that first weild the knife ... beat those voices and live ... discover your own self worth ... I have seen it ... you will find it in your words.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by Kay-Kay on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:29:34 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE, I CAN REALLY FEEL ALL THE PAIN AND EMOTION IN THIS, IT SHOWS ALOT OF ANGER IT'S GREAT KEEP IT UP
~Kay-Kay |
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:15:42 PM AEST
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| very dark write here. im truly impressed by your great ability to describe things, no matter the subject. this one really stands out. the subject matter is a bit dark for my tastes, but wow it was such a good read. scary even. Great stuff |
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:18:06 AM AEST
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Krissie this was outstanding one of the best dark poems you have writen so far. It's just amazing from beggining to the end.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:59:36 PM AEST
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yeppers.... i find this disturbing but in a weirdly good way as it makes one think, excellent write, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:07:37 PM AEST
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Very creepy and makes self-injury almost
seem ritualistic in a way. Very well done I
enjoyed it muchly.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Mutilated Beauty
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by b_rand on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:18:46 PM AEST
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WHOA ... Sadistic!
Now this is some surprising content! |
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