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Caged Bird
Contributed by
Evilnn
on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:50:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She's locked in a cage
But dreams of being free
Soaring through the air
Without so much as a care
She sees a beautiful sunrise, Glorious mountains,
Tranquil lake, She thinks she's in heaven
She opens her eyes
And faces the sad surprise
She still remains in this cage of saddness
Knowing to much longer will
Cause her maddness
She pleads, "Someone please help me!"
But no one comes to her aid
Instead they add more locks
to her cage.
Copyright ©
Evilnn
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2005-03-11 13:50:10]
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Re: Caged Bird
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:20:28 PM AEST
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| so sad. i'm used to the kind of hurt dreams leave when reality hits. doesn't happen a whole lot, but when it does, it comes on strong. I can easily relate to this, keep it up |
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Re: Caged Bird
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:49:37 PM AEST
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| Dead on. kudos. |
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Re: Caged Bird
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by enjoiskating6 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:34:41 PM AEST
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| nicely done, i like the way you rhymed, cool poem |
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