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Shattered Lullaby
Contributed by
Evilnn
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:20:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The child lies in her bed
Eyes wide open, no sleep ahead
The only way to sleep
She had to hide
For the only way to slumber
Was thoughts of suicide
Like a movie of the week
She played out every detail
In her head
From beginning to end
Until she was dead
Copyright ©
Evilnn
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2005-03-11 13:20:59]
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Re: Shattered Lullaby
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:34:09 PM AEST
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Very nicely written. I'm sorry to hear about your family, perhaps if you tried talking to them about it? The poem itself is short, sweet but beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Shattered Lullaby
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:21:48 PM AEST
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writing sets many people free, it is good self help. short but very, very sad and powerful
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