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In Memorium: The King
Contributed by
glu1
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:06:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Trapped forever
behind a cold glass mirror
entombed in the coffin
of my broken, bleeding heart
There you stood
My eyes drank deep
from your fountain
Unable to quench their eternal thirst
What happened to my perfect Kingdom?
where everything was so much more simple
and I, I was king
And, now i lie before you
broken, prostrated, dethroned
trembling in your presence
your image scorched into my mind
Here lies the king
Felled on the day
I fell in love
with You
Copyright ©
glu1
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2005-03-11 13:06:39]
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Re: In Memorium: The King
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:11:00 PM AEST
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Intense, simply a beautiful write. This is so creative and original, so strong and powerful... i'm speechless. Such a gorgeous write. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: In Memorium: The King
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:54:00 AM AEST
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Wow... this is probably the best way I have seen someone describe "true love" if you may call it that. That was a very strong way of sescribing how you felt. Great job... that rocked...
Jodi |
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Re: In Memorium: The King
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:30:54 PM AEST
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| i loved your first stanza the best in this, so creative and well written. id like to see more of that in this piece. |
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