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Trust Within a Sapient Mind
Contributed by
sean88
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:04:21 PM in AEST
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Conscientious thought confined with the norms
Of sanity and sanctions of society
The sapient mind is born
Relinquishing control and influence
Upon the average virtuous character
And therefore independence can be eventually trusted
The convenience of this profound opportunity
Is owed to the nonconforming sapient mind
Henceforth the repayment of this trust
Will be bestowed by means of gratefulness and self-belief
In the hands of the trusted beholder
Copyright ©
sean88
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2005-03-11 13:04:21]
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Re: Trust Within a Sapient Mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:12:59 PM AEST
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Stunning. This is truly a thought-provoking piece of art. Its written to perfection, flows beautifully and is, quite simply, amazing.
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Re: Trust Within a Sapient Mind
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by Row on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 05:30:17 AM AEST
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| this is just amazing, the words are just beautiful, this is an awesome piece |
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Re: Trust Within a Sapient Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:19:40 PM AEST
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| This poem is nice, I like the way the person ryhmes the words and states the feelings. |
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