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The parallels of worlds
Contributed by
HerDa
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:40:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The parallels of worlds
meet in the point of rupture
to merge forever in a passion junction.
They come across with words.
And th’ difference of words
unites with mournful torture
for useless meaning
and drowns
in the dismal emptiness of worlds.
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HerDa
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2005-03-11 07:40:24]
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Re: The parallels of worlds
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:44:16 AM AEST
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This is good, different to anything I have really seen, and though short, there is enough in it to capture interest.
This bit though:
"And th’ difference of words"
Wouldn't it have been easier to just put an 'e'?
lol.
Great write,
Welcome to YPDC, I hope you enjoy it here.
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: The parallels of worlds
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by poeteeza on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:25:09 PM AEST
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This was very nice.
Seemed very abstract and symbolic. I like it. |
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Re: The parallels of worlds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:40:51 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this. It's interesting. Good job. Keep it up. |
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