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Emotibomb
Contributed by
b_rand
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:31:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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it`s been bubbling all this time
slowly building in my mind
watch how fast I fall behind
this will not remain sublime
what it is cant be controlled
when it lets itself unfold
as the sweat begins to roll
from my head down to my toes
you will not see me as me
i`ll be acting differently
i`ll be screaming in my sleep
i`ll be twitching in my knees
and now the clock made its last tock
and so its time runs out of stock
look and see volcanic rock
i will explode when i do pop
because my fuse is getting shorter
and my temper`s out of order
i`m a bomb, i am a mortar
all witness my final furor
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2005-03-11 02:31:54]
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Re: Emotibomb
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:13:25 AM AEST
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A beautiful and emotional write. Its expressive, unique and very well written. The flow is perfect and its just... excellent.
Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: Emotibomb
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 05:49:50 AM AEST
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| liked this one, v emotive, v bomb, :-) |
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