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new start
Contributed by
dude
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sitting at work overcome in life's redundancy
Listening to the melancholy song on a drizzly day
Is this really the pinnacle of my expectancy?
Sometimes I close my eyes and daydream my job away.
I would of liked to have accomplished more
Or would of liked to have influenced today's youth
Maybe even been remembered as something other than a bore
Pretty soon my workday will end and I will make martinis to cover the truth.
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dude
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2002-12-17 02:20:00]
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Re: new start
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:43:13 AM AEST
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This is beautiful...i love the lines Sometimes i close my eyes and daydream my job away. and the way you ended it with martinis to cover the truth....geez do you realize how many people actually do this??? There are soo many people who cover the truth like this....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...
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Re: new start
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by peterdoswell on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:47:09 AM AEST
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| I love the line " make martinis to cover the truth " Great write ! |
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