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You strikes thruuu..........
Contributed by
naveen
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:53:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a desert burning
live, a dropp of water
You made a stasis, turning
Love assured no flatter,
set that love flame burning
Like a sea of water
still leaves thirst
Your eyes, shows better
I be always, always be yours first
Like a life earth, with air
Without its juss moon, abiss dead gloom
Love, life moves in gears
without,
a dead gloom,
a dark sere adds to your fears
Been consumed by lonelisness
Your love's emanation,
to fill my life hollow emptiness
Noone would have beared A rock
Your love moved a stranded boat
Now a turbulent ready to be cruise
Forgetting the lifes cruel bruise
Your face shines a like moon
Brightness reflecting my life's blooms
You're here, my life blossom with cheers
Don't go, fears arrives cheers nomore
My stranded life perpetuates with you
Thats why you only you
STRIKES THRUUUUU.....................
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naveen
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2005-03-10 22:53:44]
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Re: You strikes thruuu..........
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by veenu on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:33:50 AM AEST
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Re: You strikes thruuu..........
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