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Bloods Weight
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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The blood spills
Down the green hills
With redemption
Without condition
The nail makes
The skin break
With encryption
Without mention
The life lived
Ultimately grim
With prediction
Without conviction
The baby born
Ultimately to morn
With FICTION
Without pention
The STORY told
Ultimately to run COLD
With Blood's Weight
To Destroy Faith
...
A religion to control
With Apprehension
...
Ignorance and condemption
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-03-10 22:37:14]
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Re: Bloods Weight
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:27:00 AM AEST
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a strong powerful, thought provoking write.
Nicely written and expressed. I loved the way your poem flowed. Thanks for sharing it |
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Re: Bloods Weight
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:36:10 PM AEST
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| woot! one of your best, clark. loved it, and loved it more. one thing that is certainly different is that you spelled everything correctly. ::highfive:: except for the title. SHAME ON YOU! lol |
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