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Mentor
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
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Tributes
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Just a name, on the screen,
With a brilliant mind behind,
All of your comments, never mean,
Words meant to be kind.
You have never met me,
We have never even 'talked',
But your support lets me just be,
And in your words I have walked.
I look to your poetry as a guide,
The power and energy in it!
Each poem takes me on a new ride,
All of your words seem to fit.
When I post a new poem,
You read it and your feelings you report,
Through my account you roam,
And I want to thank you for the support.
Copyright ©
yellow_sundragon
... [
2002-12-17 02:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mentor
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:39:14 AM AEST (User
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Omg! I'm cryin so hard this touched me so deeply ...i love reading your poetry among many others here..i don't beleive in constructive criticism or however you spell it i cant think right now lol....but i dont beleive in it becoz what good does it do??? If a person writes from their heart each time they write then how can anything be wrong???? It cant....there's no poem i've ever read that i read that i thought well yuck or this isnt good....or anything of that nature....we each are beautiful individuals and each have our own style and i just want to say thank you for writing this poem for me you have no idea how greatly appreciated it is...thank you my beautiful friend...
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Re: Mentor
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:35:15 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful tribute to a deserving person...
Jenni |
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Re: Mentor
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:21:40 AM AEST (User
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Well done on this write for OREO,Shes so popular here! My words exactly! Christina |
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Re: Mentor
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:14:39 AM AEST (User
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OreO,
You totally deserve this one. All you've ever done is support me, never tear me down, and I'm glad you liked it.
YS |
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Re: Mentor
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 04:23:22 AM AEST (User
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This is such an awesome thing for you to do! Oreo totally deserves it, she comments on SO many poems, and everything she says is positive and uplifting...you certainly chose a wonderful person to dedicate a poem to. I must've missed this one when it was up on the home page, but I found it now! lol
~ Dee |
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