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Best Friend
Contributed by
un4givensoul
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:59:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Your the one whos by my side
when no one else is there.
Your the one I can always count on,
You always seem to care.
You help me through
the tough times,
and when I have lost all hope,
You cry with me at sad times,
and laugh at all my jokes.
You never seem to judge me
or ever put me down,
You put a smile on my face,
When ever you see a frown.
Your better than a brother,
Your more than just my friend,
You have a special place in my heart,
Thats why your my Best Friend.
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un4givensoul
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2005-03-10 21:59:20]
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Re: Best Friend
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:03:20 PM AEST
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| good job! a bit over the top, but i know how it feels. |
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Re: Best Friend
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 05:56:01 PM AEST
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| This poem is almost like a Hallmark card. Well structured it leaves no doubt why the person the poem speaks to is a Best Friend. Good work. |
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