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I wish I Didn't feel this Way
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish I didn't feel this way about you
Because I don't want to hurt inside
I don't want to cry myself to sleep
I am afraid of these feelings
Because they've hurt me so many times
And they still linger in the darkness of my soul
I hate how you make me feel inside
I hate how you make me smile
I hate how I think about you at night,
Yet I like it at the same time
I know what I feel can never be
Or perhaps that is just my pessimism speaking
I hate how far we are separated,
Yet I smile because I don't want to hurt you
I enjoy our friendship and I would hate to destroy that
Then why does confusion and uncertainty still reign?
I guess what I am wondering is
Will you give me a chance?
Yet both answers I would hate to hear
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bobotheclown
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2005-03-10 21:45:34]
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by venkat on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:01:37 AM AEST
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Really a nice work..speaks aloud of your heart."Yet I smile because I don't want to hurt you..I enjoy our friendship and I would hate to destroy that"..shows your heart felt love.
God Bless:-) venkat
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:38:23 AM AEST
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This is lovely, Joel, and I think many people can relate to it, becasue it is something a lot of us go through.
I hope you feel better about things and they become easier to understand soon.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:00:47 PM AEST
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"I wish I didn't feel this way!"
How very fitting to how I feel right now.
Very well expressed, Joel.
Best of luck to you..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:14:20 PM AEST
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your so hard on yourself joel, you are a wonderful man and i for one have always wished for your happiness, great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:35:30 PM AEST
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Oh, Joel... a heartwrenching piece.... literally it seems.
I feel for you... but all I can tell you is to follow your heart and just................. breathe......... very slowly.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:48:30 PM AEST
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| been there before, and somehow i always get stranded there again and again. ::sigh:: another masterpiece. quit making my poems look horrible next to yours =] jk, i need something worth reading these days. =] |
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Re: I wish I Didn't feel this Way
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:44:25 PM AEST
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oh joel, i can tell so much has gone into this.. brimming with emotion - my favourite kind of poetry. i hope everything turns out how you want it to.
charlotte xxx |
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