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murder
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:21:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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he barged in the room
a young woman sleeps
soundlessly
unawakened
he crashed into the desk
she stirs
and awakens
she screams at the sight
he told her,
its the last time you'll scream
shes frozen
cant move or speak
he gets off the floor
and lifts the gun to her head
another crash
it distracts him
she takes the gun
as another walks in
begging him not to hurt her
he saw the love in his eyes
he pulled out another gun
and shoots him
shes mad
and fires the gun
over and over
she races to his side
and crys
she needs him
she loves him
he said things
that needed to be said
and drifted away
she continues to cry
she begs him to come back
says i love you
and took the gun to her head
and pulled the trigger
they were both buried
side by side
under the willow tree
the priest said at the funeral
they loved each other so much
one couldnt deal w/out the other
i hope their together now...
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2005-03-10 21:21:44]
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Re: murder
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:36:27 PM AEST
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| interesting... good. i hope this is not a true story |
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Re: murder
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:52:52 PM AEST
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| a little choppy, but otherwise really good. reminds me of a song...anywho, nice job. |
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