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Lovers Tiff
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:25:08 PM in AEST
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This is an on-going battle,
One that makes our hearts rattle,
Harsh words said in the moment’s heat,
One which makes us & un-happiness meet.
Awful things said insults hurled,
Two lovers tossed into a lonely world,
A world where sadness lives & breathes,
A place where our souls can’t help but grieve.
Here is where you can love & still hate,
Relationships carry an uncertain fate,
Words that are spoken can’t be unsaid,
Cruel, cold words that put love in its death bed.
We all have them at one time or another,
You see the enemy & forget the lover,
Hate grabs a hold of your heart,
Tearing you & the person you love far apart.
A lovers tiff hits you right in your soul,
Lets all your hurt & sadness unfold,.
Words are said that are not really meant,
But it’s too late as un-happiness has left its dent
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-10 20:25:08]
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Re: Lovers Tiff
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:54:44 PM AEST
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Hey there a well written poem I am sorry that
you had a fight though. I wish that you felt no
unhappiness or sadness, but for some
reason we all do and itseems as if it strikes
the best people most often. Just know that
fights can strengthen a relationship. Keep up
the writing hun.
Hugs,
Joel |
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Re: Lovers Tiff
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:49:16 AM AEST
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HOW TRUE! YOU HIT THE HEART RIGHT ON THE HEAD!! WHENEVER I GET THAT MAD,I TRY TO TAKE A WALK UNTIL I COOL OFF!!! NICE WRITE!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Lovers Tiff
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by venkat on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:06:48 AM AEST
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| Awww..its breath taking..any way it is well concluded..hugs:-) venkat |
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Re: Lovers Tiff
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:47:14 AM AEST
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Words said in anger. Some words are hard to forgive and certain words stay in your heart always. I hope these words can be forgiven between you.
All the best Pixie
A really well expressed write
Brilliant
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Lovers Tiff
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:11:23 PM AEST
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This is so sad and so true sweetie.
I hope you and Mark haven't fought again.
This is very heartwrenching and I can relate to it as many can.
Great job putting it into words like this.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Lovers Tiff
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:23:51 PM AEST
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A truly excellent poem. Is beautiful and sad at the same time. I'm sorry things are tough at the minute, I hope things clear up soon. Keep your chin up. :o)
Take Care
- Becca |
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