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From A Seed To A Tree
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:59:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Seeds bloom into startling trees,
with a little water, and oppurtunity
they become tall oaks,
they weather the weather,
they out last the folks,
this little seed ,
will out last you and me,
if it can only weather the storm.
Faith is as blind
as Stevie Wonder,
I often wonder if I will find
that tallest tree,
with so much faith
and fruit that's free,
but all around
there's only bushes.
Fearful creatures
that doubt pushes
around on a whim
because the roots of faith
have yet to begin
to take root,
take hold,
in the earth.
It's okay to believe,
to offer a reprieve
from too much doubt,
but without a doubt
watch what you say
be careful of the way
you come across,
because if you give,
then you will recieve
as good as you get
and I bet
that it hurts
because you're still just a seed,
dreaming of a tree
to be freed
from the ground,
so don't be afraid,
to let your leaves show,
just remember,
you still have to grow.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-03-10 19:59:31]
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Re: From A Seed To A Tree
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by xtremcalibur on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:48:15 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem because it was light-hearted. The problem I had was that I got lost. I loved the ending because I have an imagination just like you. Other than that, good write. |
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Re: From A Seed To A Tree
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:34:43 AM AEST
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About development in participation, right?
"Faith is as blind
as Stevie Wonder,"
It is? I assume that it listens, however . . .
Keep writing. |
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Re: From A Seed To A Tree
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:12:50 PM AEST
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| CodyJ the more I read your stuff the more I like it. You are wonderful at expressing yourself. I loved this poem, the way you used the oak and the seed to convey your message. Much peace to you. Laura |
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