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SCARS
Contributed by
Anti_social
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:48:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I am so down
and it's all thanx to you
Everybody just leave me alone
I'm ganna do what I wanna do
Leave me alone, I'm to deep
in my depression
I don't wana see you anymore
you caused all of this
Your lies... Your mistrust...
these are what left me in the dark
and caused these scars
There nobody here that I love
as much as I loved you
I walk alone, knowing
these scars will never go away
and they're all thanx to you
What we had was just a bunch of lies,
now I feel like these scars on my heart were
left there on purpose, by you.
I'm too deep in my depression, I don't
think I'll ever fing my way through
this Darkness
These scars are forever just like I
thought that we were
Thanx for what you left behind...
THESE SCARS
Copyright ©
Anti_social
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2005-03-10 19:48:54]
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Re: SCARS
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkcutterBree on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:14:44 PM AEST
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i personally love this poem. i read your journal and you must be a cutter. i am too. yuo seem to havea lot of poetic potential. i hope you keep writing. you should look at this great poem caled Her Savior its really good and bout suicide. also i am putting stuff from my cuttings on here. check em out please!
great job.
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Re: SCARS
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:43:21 PM AEST
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This is a great poem....Im very keen on structure and you have talent....Very well done
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