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Pleasure kills
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blood on me
Wont set free
Tortured soul
Black as coal
Cant full fill
Need to kill
My sharp knife
Takes your life
Bloody cough
Skin ripped off
Dark red blood
Watch it flood
At the cut
In your gut
Screaming pain
Wont sustain
My bloodlust
Lethal thrust
Tears apart
Your black heart
Intense fear
Death is here
His black gown
Takes you down
Hell burns hot
As you rot
Maggots crawl
As worms sprawl
Pleasure kills
Make my thrills
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blacksabbath026
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2005-03-10 19:46:36]
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Re: Pleasure kills
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkcutterBree on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:35:28 PM AEST
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i love this..its got a very dark adn scary kind of feel...i enjoy this "sick" and twisted type stuff.
you did a great job. i have allways enjoyed your poems adn stuff!
~bree
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thegirlwithsolittle |
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Re: Pleasure kills
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:37:16 PM AEST
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| woah.. That was just..perfect. Like one of those flip books that go really fast and from one image from another..i loved it. Great write. |
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