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A wish upon your Birth
Contributed by
Nardo
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:16:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A secret is what I wish to give you
Sweet and Kind
carried on the white feathers
of Cupid's wings.
A secrets I keep
locked away for rainy days
a thought of you to bring
this lonesome soul
a brief moment of sun shine.
Many Moons rise and set
upon your soft smile
gentle on side
and deep with soul.
A rumble on my belly
to match the beating of your heart
when you're near
and when you speak
those wild wings sprout
and once again
I take flight.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2005-03-10 19:16:54]
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Re: A wish upon your Birth
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:10:05 AM AEST
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If I read this right you are with child--congrat's. A child brings sunshine and rain
Happiness and pain
A brand new soul
With wings to go
A heavenly flight
Carring you to heavens hight
Once born never to die
An everlasting angel in Gods eye
Nice poem
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Re: A wish upon your Birth
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:26:32 PM AEST
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Ooo... nice one. You have been able to really be able to explain yourself and how you feel. This is one of the poems where as I read it I felt like I was the one in the poem. Good job...
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