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This Broken Heart
Contributed by
ihopeyouchokex
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You left my heart a broken mess on the ground, A mess that cannot be picked up,fixed and put back on the shelf like a toy waiting to be bought,It lies ruthfully beaten still in the place where you left it,the same spot where we would sit with each other under the stars and talk about how much our lives have bettered scince we've met,It lies struggiling to beat, Its been through so much scince we've met but this incident will not be forgotten, I sit here now with tears streaming down my face,Wishing for life to end. You say let's still be friends but how can i when the very thought of you kill's me inside, I wished for a happy ending but not all wishes come true,I wish we could rewind to the parts that made scence, When we were happy and nothing could tear us apart, I need this more then ever, The remains of my shattered heart still tries to beat, giving me new hope.
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Re: This Broken Heart
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:07:32 PM AEST
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| awe .. you poor thing .. broken hearts are really hard to mend believe me i know .. its kinda impossible to be "just friends" because you still have a place for that person in your heart .. but have faith in yourself and for a new love and i hope everything is okay .. and of course nice writing ! |
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Re: This Broken Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:35:06 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings... hugs n' love nessa
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