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Mommy PLEASE
Contributed by
RazorBladeWar
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Beauty is her features
But faults are on her mind
Why does she not see what i see
A Bright Shining star
She hides her feelings from her daddy
but tells me what she really feels
she crys for her mommy
but gets no response
she shakes her hard
but she's past out cold
she thinks her mommies gone
she knew it happened again
even after all those times she said
she would never stick that needle
In her fragile arm again
everyday is this way
and by the day is done
she crys with her teddy bears
and in her mind she runs
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2005-03-10 18:52:25]
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Re: Mommy PLEASE
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by nail-to-the-head on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:30:04 PM AEST
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| really good write, and she must be a very brave girl! |
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Re: Mommy PLEASE
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by Rottenrioter on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:04:28 PM AEST
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hey chic...like ive said before this is my most fave one you've written...keep up the good work.
xXBrittanyXx |
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Re: Mommy PLEASE
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by xtremcalibur on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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| What can I say, a great compilation of words to create your "Mommy PLEASE". Good write. |
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