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Surrender

Contributed by RazorBladeWar on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Surrender!

All these intense feelings
They make me want to give in
i try to be brave
but there is just some much pain
Rushing within
rightnow i feel like
letting it all go
just to take this tip and and Tear into my soul
just to watch the red drips
Silently fall on this
Blood covered bath
i finally realize
that everyone knew i wouldn't last
memories come crashing back
its to late now that past is no longer the past
i give in and serrender to this sharp blade
i fall to the ground
blood draining out of my face
i went to deep
i guess i meant it
I just want to go to sleep
and wake up in a place where i don't exist
i taste death
i know it is coming near
and with every breathe i want it dream it crave it
even more
i just want to see if there is something beyonde here
a place where no one feels a place were pain isn't in the air
im lying silently
on the bathroom floor
my face is pale
And nothing is here
ive almost died
All i wanted was maybe just maybe
there might be a hope for me somewhere
once again this only world i have ever known
deserted me
left me dying
my cry out for help meant nothing
to the conceited people of this generation
they were all cought up in there own lives
they they didn't hear my silent screams
how about now? ..
im lying here with little life left in me
i say to the world with my last few heart beats
You were all fake anyways
im just glad its done
glad its over
glad i surrendered
Now here with no movement
see how you feel!

Copyright © RazorBladeWar ... [ 2005-03-10 18:39:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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