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I dont really do titles...untitled
Contributed by
ihopeyouchokex
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:37:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"Ill love you always and forever" She said,
But tomorows a new day
And like the summer breeze
...She was gone
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2005-03-10 18:37:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I dont really do titles...untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:21:39 PM AEST (User
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Yeah... it is pretty short. So I wasn't able to acually get into it as quick. For the few lines it had it was good, but if it was longer I would like it better. It would be easier to get wrapped up in it and feel what you want the reader to feel...
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