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the end
Contributed by
vindicated_loZer
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:31:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you smile, i scream
bright knife, white gleam
your kiss, my tears
your lies, my fears
i rip, you bend
your smile, my end
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Re: the end
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:02:50 PM AEST
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This is truly a wonderful piece of writing. Again its short, but deep and powerful. I really love it. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: the end
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by Maxximus on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:12:43 PM AEST
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| The contrast of two people's emotions and their correlation was well played, plus the rhyme scheme gave it a nice flow- I enjoyed this piece. |
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