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wants are never
Contributed by
electrique_poet
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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wants are never needs and(never say never i say
wear the hat your grandmother gave you im
sure its dust is engraven with the story of an
argument;
though somehow i doubt anyone will read it as
the forecast outside seems to be (nothing) rain
and its going to last days, or life;
on through childhood bearing children and
laying them to rest in cobwebs)
kept as spare change in your pocket; because
you wanted the candy bar, and you hastily ate
a future and a dream
gone in an instant;
and while your needs are always needing your
wants are always recieving as in
disagreeing)
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2005-03-10 17:35:35]
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Re: wants are never
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:38:24 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Powerful words. Expressive, strong and simply brilliant. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: wants are never
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by creed on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:34:17 PM AEST
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| You know...this poem is very true. Another work of brilliance from you. |
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