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THE LISTENER
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:53:29 PM in AEST
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DEEP WITHIN YOUR HEART
I FOUND YOUR SOUL
IT TOOK SOME TIME TO GET THERE
BUT IT WAS SOMEWHERE I HAD TO GO
YOU SAID YOU HAD FORGOTTEN HOW TO SMILE
SO YOU HID YOUR EMOTIONS
BUT THESE ARE JUST PARTS OF A WOMANS TRAIL
YOUR NOT THE ONLY GIRL TO EVER GET HURT
HOW CAN YOU GIVE RESPECT
WHEN YOU HAVE ALREADY BEEN BURNT
I COULDN'T GAIN YOUR TRUST
CAUSE YOU SAID
YOU WERE TIRED OF BEING PLAYED
HOW MANY TIMES HAD I HEARD YOU SAY
GUYS JUST WANNA GET LAID
YOU CRIED ON MY SHOULDER
WHEN YOUR EYES COULDN'T HOLD YOUR TEARS
YOU EVEN OPENED UP TO SHARE YOUR DEEPEST DARKEST FEARS
PAIN IS ONLY TEMPORARY
IT WONT LAST ANY LONGER
REMEMBER
WHAT DOESN'T KILL YOU
ONLY MAKES YOU STRONGER
DON'T LOOK FOR LOVE
LET IT SEARCH FOR YOU
YOU WILL KNOW WHEN IT HAPPENS
CAUSE YOUR SMILE WILL SHINE THROUGH
HE WILL MAKE YOU BLUSH
WITH COMPLEMENTS ON HOW YOU DRESS
HE'LL TELL YOU TO TAKE WHAT LIFE GIVES YOU
AND NOT TO SETTLE FOR ANYTHING LESS
SO LEARN TO TRUST ME
AND EXPRESS HOW YOU FEEL
CAUSE THE MAN THAT STANDS BEFORE YOU
IS FOR REAL
Copyright ©
THUGGIN4REAL
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2005-03-10 16:53:29]
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:59:44 PM AEST
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A beautiful and inspiring write. Very nicely done here, a work of art. I love it, its a nice idea too.
Take Care
- Becca |
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:00:58 PM AEST
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this is terrific and Im sure she is appreciating these words right now
Michelle |
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by Daniels_Princess on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:01:50 PM AEST
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| I loved it..it brought tears to my eyes cause its so true.. |
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:21:09 PM AEST
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| Damn...can I be your girl?? I love this poem...Tiffany J. |
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:28:37 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is really captivating and reassuring!
I see you're not all 'fighter'... I like the 'soft' side of you.
Thanks for sharing it..
I enjoyed this immensely....
Jenni
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by Kay-Kay on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:09:01 PM AEST
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HEY THIS IS REALLY GREAT REALLY WISH I WAS YOUR GIRL THATS REALLY GOOD.
~KAY-KAY |
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:05:48 AM AEST
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A truly beautifully composed and well expressed piece of poetry. It's great to see the other side to ya. A pleasant and enjoyable poem.
Keep up the great work |
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by SourPatchGurl on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:05:38 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I love it. |
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Re: THE LISTENER
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by reflections on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:37:27 PM AEST
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If you’re half as real as your words you deserve to be trusted. What you have to dig deep to find, is well worth bringing to the surface, and sharing. This one will stand the test of time.
John
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