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So Far Away
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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looking down into the water
we're on opposing teams
everyone seems so far away from me
and you - you're only random like my dreams
looking down from the bridge
it's so dark down there
looking down from the ledge
it's still raining up here
have i ever told you how i want to be free?
i look away from the sky
it's so sad without wings
and if i had them i would fly away
but i don't know how i'd say goodbye
maybe like magic
i'd put my hands over your eyes
i'd look down from the bridge
and we'd both start to fly
never return to this desolate place
forever together so far away
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Re: So Far Away
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by Compton-tre-block on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:53:45 PM AEST
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NICE ...
IT MAKES ME THINK BOUT MY MA'S
ALL THE WAY OVER INDIANA |
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Re: So Far Away
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:59:30 PM AEST
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Oh to have them wings to fly. A wonderful poem really enjoyed
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: So Far Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:03:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful and yet heart-wrenchingly sad at the same time. I particularly liked the last bit, very nicely done with strong imagry.
Take Care
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Re: So Far Away
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by jeannoh on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:26:24 PM AEST
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Very sad but beautiful poem
well written
I enjoyed it
thanks for sharing
Lady Jeannoh |
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Re: So Far Away
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:15:30 AM AEST
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a sad, but beautifully composed piece of poetry you have written TiffanyJ.
Pleasant and enjoyable to read. |
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