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REDEMPTION & REPENTINCE

Contributed by THUGGIN4REAL on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



REDEMPTION IS WERE I'M AT IN MY LIFE
STUDY THIS WORD
AND YOU WILL KNOW MY SOUL WASN'T RIGHT
I'VE DONE THINGS PEOPLE DIDN'T HAVE THE HEART TO DO
MY LOYALTY WAS DIFFERENT
BUT NEVER DOUBTED TO BE TRUE
I'D PUT IN WORK OUT ON THE STREETS
MY FAMILY WORRIED ABOUT ME
BUT I DID IT SO I COULD EAT
SO I'D HAVE ENERGY TO KEEP ME FROM DEFEAT
BORN TO BE A FIGHTER
I EARNED MY RESPECT
SO WHEN I ENDED UP IN PRISON
IT WAS ALREADY TO EXPECT
WOMEN WERE AROUND
BUT THEY HAD TO EARN THEIR KEEP
THEY WERE LUCKY
THIS THUG HAD A HEART
CAUSE I NEVER ASKED FOR ANYTHING
WHEN THEY NEEDED A PLACE TO SLEEP
DEATH CAME TO ME AS NO SURPRISE
BUT WHEN HE STOLE MY BROTHER
REVENGE BLEAD FROM MY EYES
I WALKED THE HOOD WITHOUT FEAR
CAUSE I WAS BULIT HOOD
PEOPLE WISHED ME DEAD
BUT THEIR TRIGGERS NEVER COULD
GOD ONCE TOLD ME TO ACCEPT JESUS
AND HE'LL FORGET MY PAST
MY QUSETION TO HIM WAS
WHEN I DO
HOW LONG WILL IT LAST
REDEMPTION MEANS TO COME CLEAN OR TO MAKE RIGHT
ONCE I PUT IT INTO PRATICE
I WAS ABLE TO SLEEP AT NIGHT
IF YOU WOULD OF KNOWN ME BACK IN THOSE DAYS
YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE THE THINGS I USE TO SAY
TO KNOW ME IS TO LOVE ME
SO I TAKE IT DAY BY DAY
REDEMPTION IS WHAT MADE ME RIGHT
REPENTINCE IS SO I CAN SLEEP AT NIGHT




Copyright © THUGGIN4REAL ... [ 2005-03-10 16:14:57]
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Re: REDEMPTION & REPENTINCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:05:07 PM AEST
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Another great write, keep it up..=)


Re: REDEMPTION & REPENTINCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Compton-tre-block on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:05:20 PM AEST
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LUVED IT MY BRUTHA...
IM FEELIN U..MOST OF THESE CATS
ON HERR AINT FEELIN PEOPLE LIKE U AN ME..
ITS JUS CUZ THEY DONT KNOW THE LIFE
THEY SIPPIN TEA IN ENGLAND AN *****..
DONT LET EM BREAK YA THOUGH..
100


Re: REDEMPTION & REPENTINCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:09:41 PM AEST
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lol! Whats wrong with sipping tea in England? Another stunning write here, deep, insightful and written to perfection as always. A masterpiece by the master himself.

Thanks for sharing.

Take Care
- Becca


Re: REDEMPTION & REPENTINCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:01:15 PM AEST
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Ok..this is one I can identify with. You are an amazing writer. I hope you find what you are looking for....
Jenni


Re: REDEMPTION & REPENTINCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:06:10 PM AEST
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great poem keep 'em coming always here to drop a comment ~Kay-Kay




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