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To My Love
Contributed by
NamesAreTaken
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:06:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have received Coldness from my love
The type of cold that would turn feet black
And cause nostrils to cement together
Numbness sets in
Then darkness follows
A Frigidness that would make Santa buys a time-share in a tropical paradise
This makes me into an ice sculpture carved by god
That only stays cold because of you my love
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Re: To My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by jeannoh on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:29:11 PM AEST (User
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wow...you must really feel bad about your relationship...your poem definatly reflects the Negitive ...you get the message across clear..
thanks for sharing this with us
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