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Sins Revisited
Contributed by
maylaur
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 03:35:41 PM in AEST
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Hardships incurred
Problems be dealt
This is the worst
I’ve ever felt
Love flown away
Friendships be gone
When this day ends
I will be done
Whispers of glee
Blown by the wind
Please forgive me
For I have sinned
I have held hope
I have fed ire
I have indulged
I have desired
This end is near
I see the light
Lead me this trip
Into the blight
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maylaur
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2005-03-10 15:35:41]
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Re: Sins Revisited
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:11:11 PM AEST
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| i'm glad you share it, it came out well done.... so why did you sin?.... |
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Re: Sins Revisited
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:23:01 AM AEST
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Seriously... this is a great write, but why did you sin. I wanna know, come on! Lol... nice poem...
Jodi |
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Re: Sins Revisited
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th November 2011 @ 12:14:10 AM AEST
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i think that the point of this poem is that we all sin :p and it is not specifically about a certain one.
Lovely poem. You have a knack for writing. |
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