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Winter's Day
Contributed by
rcav8ing
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 03:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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It’s freezing outside
The door closes behind me
Ahhhh, warmth once again
Copyright ©
rcav8ing
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2005-03-10 15:24:59]
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Re: Winter's Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by jeannoh on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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short but sweet
I liked it
thanks for sharing it with us
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Re: Winter's Day
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:20:18 AM AEST
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Lol... it's funnny. People come to a poem with three lines and they thing, "How stupid... it is a three line poem", but after they say or think that they notice that it is a haiku. Haikus are really hard to do. You have to express your feeling with limited writing space. That is really difficult to do. I need at least 20 lines. So considering you are limited to not only the amount of syllables used, but the amount of line too, great job. I am going to attemp a hailu and hopefully it could be one tenth as good as yours. Lol... nice write...
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Re: Winter's Day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 10:58:27 AM AEST
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| This is really nice. Good job! |
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