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The Endless Summer Gloamingness (or: The Pearl)
Contributed by
Sagacious
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 01:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Exposition
"Cigarette," says he;
"Fire," says she;
He, of noble stature,
She, of flesh and earth.
Intertwining smoke of ages
Makes clear the night's solemn hue
In nether-light reflections
Of fading sensibility.
He stands exposed,
The noble savage,
Submersed in white light
Of flesh and earth and fire.
Revelation
The colors, they are
neutron stars, in the gloaming
of her twilight eyes:
in copacetic netherness,
I gleam in she, and she,
azure in me:
like life along these
neon nary-ways:
Starburst--this spark:
what love? what jest?
what flightless finiteness?
The earth is our oyster, I say:
and in her eyes, presents the pearl.
Addendum: A Paradox of Bodies
Naked in the morning--day unto another, as
cells recoil, delivering
on the promise of their journey:
that this living organ-ism
should play to an instinct for
perpetual dawnings--
(Naked refers to exposure)--
in mo(u)rning, little deaths of
organ-ing's prior manifestisms--
antecedents--come to succession.
Copyright ©
Sagacious
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2005-03-10 13:08:16]
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Re: The Endless Summer Gloamingness (or: The Pearl)
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 01:37:52 PM AEST
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My dearest Sagacious... Absolutely breaht-taking, beautiful, and ever flawless! You have created another impeccable tale of surreal images, love, memories... I truly love this piece, cheri ami!! INCREDIBLE! More when words are suitable! All my love! Forever,
Your dear friend,
Stephy!! *Fleur de bonheur* |
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Re: The Endless Summer Gloamingness (or: The Pearl)
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:20:57 AM AEST
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Wow... this right here is amazing. Seriously... I don't think I have seen a better poem. I am almost speechless... I am not sure what else to say. What an amazing write. True talent here...
Jodi |
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