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Darwin Music
Contributed by
Corwin
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 12:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Used to the sounds of
Used to the sounds of
Fenced in
Boundary independence
Waging wars of survival
Restless
Though motivated by
Inaccurate predictions
More than we could ask for
-Darwin music
A graceful dive, divine
Below,
Beneath a shadowy surface
Opaque in substance
Says the fall sky
In collision with its twin
Twisted together in love
-Darwin music
Fog dreams puncture the night
Wearing its black cape
Riding swiftly, silently
Playing marbles with the planets
In a utopia realized
Shattered by shards of apathy
Distant and fleeting
-Darwin music
Copyright ©
Corwin
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2005-03-10 12:50:41]
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Re: Darwin Music
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:29:48 PM AEST
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| that was a different write, quite different from my write, i understand it, although i free write, more so than actually writing poetry. but it was very good... |
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Re: Darwin Music
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:49:15 PM AEST
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| Deep and interesting. I liked it. Nice work. |
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Re: Darwin Music
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:04:59 AM AEST
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The first stanza... I am not sure if it sounds right being wrote twice, but I think the rest of the poem was done well. Nice write...
Jodi |
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