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Sending Snow
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:50:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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--she gave me your address.
No, ( . . . ) I knew
I just...
It's winter here;
('Whisp'ry, windy winter"--remember?)
Like feathers kissing your cheeks and then giggling into the background
--wet, sloppy,
leaving you looking like you'd cried
>>i'm
doing pretty well, myself
Got the dance moves down, for once
wrote the perfect letter {yeah--I know}
supermarket finally stocked that ice cream I {you}
loved so much
still
feel you from time to time,
[some mornings
-funny tingling where your arms used to be-
(you always made me laugh)
so hard]
---( ,) I'm not crying...
I ........ . . . . . . knew
[---right--from the start..]
Just-mailing a little snowflake,
----------- [ .goodbye]
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2005-03-10 08:50:57]
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Re: Sending Snow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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. . . dance moves?
The mind boggles . . . |
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Re: Sending Snow
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:30:40 AM AEST
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| I love the structure of this poem. |
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