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Meant To Be...
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:19:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can still remember that very day
When destiny made you cross my way
That moment my heart began to see
That living this life is worthwhile
With each time that I see you smile
I know you and I are meant to be
I tried to resist the love that I feel
Tried to turn away from what is real
For you I see myself as unworthy
And I find it hard to sleep at night
How can something wrong feel so right?
Maybe you and I are meant to be
I have tried so hard just to confide
This love for you that I feel inside
Hoping that you might set me free
From the chain of love I am bound
You are the love that I have found
You and I are simply meant to be
I try so hard to question fate
Until I realize that I am too late
My life without you would be empty
Because of you I’ve learned to live
Will you accept this love that I give?
You and I are truly meant to be
Copyright ©
ButchCorpuz
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2005-03-10 05:19:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Meant To Be...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:30:52 AM AEST (User
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Good write....flows so beautifully..... with its unusual rhyme scheme...
Well done!!
Jenni |
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Re: Meant To Be...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:56:47 AM AEST (User
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Very nicely done. A pleasure to read. |
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Re: Meant To Be...
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAndADay on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:28:20 AM AEST (User
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Very lovely. Sometimes it's hard to believe it's possible to feel this way about someone. Keep it up. |
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Re: Meant To Be...
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 03:38:59 PM AEST (User
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Oh, how I know this feeling... Flawless till the very end!! Excellent flow, interesting rhyme scheme, all in all, a beautiful masterpiece! LOVE IT! I believe many can relate to this one. Perfect in every way conceivable. Merci for sharing this with us!! All my love! Forever,
Stephy. *Fleur* |
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