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Words for reading.......
Contributed by
Mystic_Beauty_nz
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:33:20 AM in AEST
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oops
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I write the words passed on to me
On how to free humanity
From all the burdens dragging down
So many souls seem doomed to drown
The anti-clockwise spiral spinning
Forever downward in a cloud
Can be reversed to motion forward
Removing all the darkened gray shroud
Doom and gloom so many see
As the only way to be
Look forward and witness Light ahead
Release from darkness permanently
Copyright ©
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2005-03-10 02:33:20]
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Re: Words for reading.......
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:41:27 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. |
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Re: Words for reading.......
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by ForeverAndADay on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:31:10 AM AEST
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| Fantastic! I love your rymn sceme it flowed well and your poem was very well written. I hope to see more. |
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Re: Words for reading.......
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:55:12 AM AEST
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| Nice thoughts keep writing. It also could mean you were in a tornado. |
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