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Fufilling a Tragedy
Contributed by
Drop-of-Red
on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:31:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Apologies floating in the air like a river
No one wants you here anymore
You're face haunting my dreams like a fever
Why can't you dissapear through the door
Yesterday was another passing moment
We thought everything would be the same
But you had to end it in catastrophy
Do you enjoy causing me so much pain?
My life is a train on it's edge
About to fall right off the tracks
My heart is crumbling in my chest
There's no more room for me to rest
My self esteem is slowly dying
Soon to be lost in my pool of lies
My eyes can't control all the crying
Sometimes I wish I'd fall asleep and die
Another stroll around the sidewalk
More passing glares will catch my eye
I can see them whispering and talking
About my ugliness outside
I reach the corner
To see myself across the street
A spitting image of a dying man
And a stray car meets my feet
My life is a train on it's edge
About to fall right off the tracks
My heart is crumbling in my chest
There's no more room for me to rest
My self esteem is slowly dying
Soon to be lost in my pool of lies
My eyes can't control all the crying
Sometimes I wish I'd fall asleep and die
Breaking
My heart and mind are so alone
Breaking
I can feel the sorrow in my bones
Breaking
I'm falling asleep longer than before
Breaking
I'll be dead before I hit the floor
Goodbye
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2005-03-09 23:31:40]
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Re: Fufilling a Tragedy
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by girltranscended on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:55:31 PM AEST
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wow. Really, really cool write. It is full of images and emotion. And the ending, woah, very powerful.
"Breaking
My heart and mind are so alone
Breaking
I can feel the sorrow in my bones"
These lines, if truly heartfelt, are amazing to be here. Strong and so very emotional. Great job!
The one line I didn't get was
"And a stray car meets my feet" |
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Re: Fufilling a Tragedy
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:09:31 AM AEST
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this is very sad and i im sorry for what people think of you. please dont give in, i feel this way evryday.
"My life is a train on it's edge
About to fall right off the tracks
My heart is crumbling in my chest
There's no more room for me to rest"
i love that stanza, so powerful and the ending is amazing. brilliant poetry.
hope always rach |
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