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Open Up!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:56:59 AM in AEST
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All I see are frightened people
So scared they might expose
Their nakedness and beauty
Wrapped up tight beneath their clothes
We should set our spirits free
Open up and love this life
Stop being held by anguish
Just roll those emotional dice
A gamble it might be
But it’s one that we should take
If we’re ever to be happy
Love’s at least our greatest stake
We all have love to give
We all have love to loose
But it’s never gone forever
It’s there for sharing, if we so choose
Not just that certain someone
Not just that special heart
Give your love to everybody
In total, not in part
Real beauty’s there inside you
You don’t even have to look
To find what it is you’re searching for
You won’t read it in a book
No film or song can show you
The love which you will find
From being honest with others
Be yourself, but mostly be kind.
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Re: Open Up!
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by Sherry_Gail_Heim on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 10:16:04 AM AEST
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In the wise words of Emily Dickinson "All I know of love is that love is all there is." Great write. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Re: Open Up!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:36:19 PM AEST
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Hi Sherry, I can't read too well, so I'll take your word for Emily Dickinsons!
Thankyou for being so pleased with my writing
With love
Dean |
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Re: Open Up!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 10:34:44 AM AEST
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Yet another great poem, Dean. I think that the world would be a better place if everyone would just open up.
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Re: Open Up!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:02:36 AM AEST
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Yes definitely Candice,
It would and should be much better, if only eh!!
Thankyou again, you're so kind!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Open Up!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:14:32 AM AEST
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Dean, I try my best to be kind. Even though through my experences many poeple haven't been very kind, but I try not to judge but what others have done. I make educated judgements by how a particular person is.
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Re: Open Up!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:31:54 PM AEST
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| Great meaning and sentiment. I don't know why more haven't commented. Cheers! |
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